Finally finished it! (you would not believe how long this took!)

 

 

JACK CHAT

SUSPECTS EPISODE 2 SCENE BREAKDOWN

 

Scene 1: 0.00-01.18

newsreader voiceover:

"Police have tonight been called to the trouble Greenpit nightclub. First reports suggest club owner Kirk Hawthorn has been the victim of a brutal assault"

Jack and Charlie are on the scene at the nightclub where Kirk has been hit over the back of the head. While there, another attack victim is discovered, the club owner tells them it is Kirk's sister, Ziggy Hawthorne.

Charlie suggests it must be a targeted attack, Jack replies

"potentially, we don't want to jump to conclusions straight away"

 

Scene 2: 01.19-02.09

Still at the club, Jack and forensics are in the area of the cctv camera, which is missing. Jack asks for the cables to be dusted for fingerprints.

"Charlie"

"yeah?"

"Is your radio broken?"

"Er, no it's not, and I don't know why you're screaming"

"Ok how can I get in touch with you"

Jack asks Charlie to talk to bar manager Guy

"He found her, go and chat to him butter him up use your wit, charm and.."

"is he hot?"

"Charlie.."

"is he?"

"Charlie.."

" I'm only going if he is."

"Charlie it's 3 in the morning, go and talk to him"

"This job

is fucking killing me, I swear."

 

Scene 3: 02.10-02.51

Charlie talks to bar manage. Guy Ollerbury, who found Kirk and dialled 999

 

Scene 4: 02.52 - 03.26

Jack asks head of security about security detail for the night and if any threats had been made to Kirk in the past couple of weeks

 

Scene 5: 03.27-03.45

Charlie tells Jack she spoke to the hospital. Ziggy has suffered a brain haemorrhage and also a drugs overdose, Kirk's head injury is not as bad as it looked, he is groggy but ok for interview

 

Scene 6: 03.46-06.02

Jack and Charlie are at the hospital. Charlie finds out Kirk's nightclub was closed last year due to drug related violence.

Jack interviews Kirk, who has no memory of the attack, just walking into his office.

 

Scene 7: 06.03-06.23

Back at HQ Charlie informs Jack the toxicology report shows Ziggy took PMA an ecstasy substitute. She asks Jack if they should wake up "the boss" but he tells her it is not necessary.

 

(Scene 8:  06.24-06.42 Charlie interviews Wakim, who was seen with Ziggy that night. He tells Charlie he is her personal trainer but hangs out with her sometimes and left the club early, and that Ziggy was also with her friend Hannah Stevenson)

 

(Scene 9: 06.43-07.54 Charlie interviews Hannah, who says she also took PMA but Ziggy took much more. She felt weird, so left to go back to her uni halls. She doesn't know where the drug came from)

 

 

Scene 10: 07.55- 08.51

Back at the hospital with Jack interviewing Kirk, who says his sister isn't a regular drug user, doesn't know who gave her the PMA and is angry about someone bringing drugs into his club

 

Scene 11: 08.52-09.27

At HQ Charlie tells Jack 19 year old Tom Yeoman has been found dead in an alleyway, with  a flyer for the nightclub and a wrap of PMA in his pocket. Jack decides DI Martha needs to be informed, "I gotta ring the boss".

 

(Scene 12: 09-28-10.14 Martha holds a police press conference appealing for witnesses and urging anyone who has taken PMA to seek medical attention)

 

Scene 13: 10.15-10.45

Martha, Charlie and Jack are in the main office. Martha informs them that Ziggy Hawthorne and Tom Yeoman's toxicology reports are identical. Jack says the fingerprints on the cctv cables belong to Dave Mastings head of security at the club. Martha tells him to arrest him for theft and they will search his premises.

 

Scene 14: 10.46-11.00

Jack brings Dave in, getting him to empty his pockets at the desk. "How many keys do you have?"

 

Scene 15: 11.01-12.52

Jack and Martha interview Dave, who claims he knows nothing about the drugs in the club or the missing cctv camera. He points the finger at Wakim, who is allowed into the club without getting patted down and has lots of nice stuff for a boxer with no money.

(Scene 16: 12.53-14.01 Charlie interviews Wakim in his boxing club, who has Ziggy's car parked outside with no insurance.)

 

Scene 17:  14.02-14.59

Jack, Charlie and Martha in Martha's office. Charlie has spoken to victim Tom Yeoman's friends who were in the club last night, they say they are occasional drug users but didn't know Tom had any substances on him, and he disappeared at 11.30pm but they thought he was just 'sharking'.

Jack: "Really?"

Charlie: "Ah, J-Bomb knows what that is."

 Jack: "I haven't sharked in a long time."

Martha: "Tell the old lady what sharking is."

Jack: "Have you never been sharked? Guys

cruising clubs looking for chicks."

 Martha: "Yes, I have. Right. Yes. And?"

Jack mentions the cctv footage shows Tom did not leave via the nightclub front door, and as the time of death was between 11.30-2am, he suggests perhaps Tom was found by nightclub staff and taken out, to avoid trouble for the club, and later found in the alleyway.

 

(Scene 18: 15.00-15.55 Charlie interviews Hannah again, she doesn't recognise Tom from his photo. She claims there was definitely something between Wakim and Ziggy)

 

Scene 19: 15.56-16.54

Martha, Jack and Charlie watch cctv of the alleyway which shows Tom Yeoman being dumped out of a car.

Jack: "10 points detective Sergeant Jack Weston"

The picture is not clear enough to see the number plate or car model but Jack notices only one break light is working.

 

Scene 20: 16.55-17.12

Jack has had a eureka moment about the number of keys Dave Mastings had on him when he arrested him, and goes to get his property from the desk. When asked to sign for it, he signs the form "kiss kiss kiss"

 

Scene 21: 17.13-17.54

Jack brings Dave's property back into the room where Martha and Charlie are talking by the crime board, empties it on the table and points out one key unaccounted for, and Dave's gym membership card. Jack suggests the key is for his gym locker. Meanwhile, Charlie has found out Kirk Hawthorne was caught with a defective brake light a few days ago.

Martha: "Bish-bash-bosh! Well done, Jack. You should be a detective.

Jack: "Thank you.  Did you hear that?" (to Charlie)

Charlie: "Just you wait.

I've just been through all our key players in traffic. Hawthorne was issued with

a vehicle-defection notice ten days ago, for a defective brake light. Boom!

 

Martha: "My top team"

 

 

Scene 22: 17.55-18.12

 

Jack is examining Kirk Hawthorne's car, confirms broken brake light to Martha and points out vomit on the back seat

 

 

Scene 23: 18.13-19.10

 

Jack arrests Kirk Hawthorne at the hospital on suspicion of conspiracy to commit manslaughter and perverting the course of justice

 

Scene 24: 19.11-20.11

Martha and Jack interview Kirk Hawthorne, who tells them he leaves his car keys in his office so any member of staff could have used them to move Tom from the club

 

(Scene 25: 20.12-21.18 Charlie interviews bar manager Guy Ollerbury, who tells her he has been on holiday snowboarding)

 

Scene 26: 21.19-21.58

Jack and Charlie are on the roof talking about the case, when Martha calls Jack with news that security Manager Dave Masting's fingerprints were on the steering wheel of Kirk's car.

 

(Scene 27: 21.59-23.12 Martha interviews Dave, who says he moved the car to make room for a big delivery and denies any knowledge of the whereabouts of the cctv camera. Martha tells him they have a warrant to search his gym locker. "Don't tell me, no comment")

 

Scene 28: 23.13-23.54

Jack goes to Dave's gym, searches his locker and finds the cctv camera,

"Bingo"

Scene 29: 23.55-24.49

Jack and Martha interview Dave, showing him cctv footage from the camera they recovered, of him carrying Tom down the stairs at the club

Martha "Oh look, who's that Dave, have you got a twin brother?"

Jack: " No comment? No comment? NO COMMENT?"

 

Scene 30: 24.50-25.53

Jack and Martha interview Dave Mastings with his solicitor present, Dave reads a statement saying Kirk had panicked about his license when Tom was found so Dave took him out via the fire exit, but he was still alive. When he returned the bar manager informed him Kirk has been assaulted, Dave told him to phone an ambulance while he removed the cctv, he hoped to identify the person himself

 

Scene 31: 25.54-27.35

Martha and Jack interview Kirk. He won't speak until Jack shows him the photo of Tom dead. He eventually admits he knew Dave moved Tom.

 

Scene 32: 27.36-28.19

The team talk in the main office, Charlie and Jack are at their desks. Jack reports 2 wraps of white substance have been found in a nightclub that morning and they've been sent to forensics. Charlie reports on Ziggy's bank statement showing lots of expensive items and interesting phone text records between Kirk and Wakim.

 

Scene 33: 28.20-30.59

Jack interviews Kirk (solicitor present) about his relationship with Wakim and explores the possibility that Ziggy might have known.

Are you fuck-buddies? What is it? What's the story?

 "I tell my sister everything"

 

(Scene 34: 31.00-31.42 Charlie interviews Wakim and asks him about his relationship with Kirk and if Ziggy knows)

 

Scene 35:  31.43-32,09

Jack tells Martha none of the fingerprints on the drug wraps belong to Wakim, so he is not the dealer. Martha asks Charlie to go through all the cctv footage of the club and track both Tom and Ziggy through the whole evening.

 

(Scene 36: 32.10-33.03 Charlie shows Martha cctv footage from the club of Ziggy and Hannah having a massive argument that night)

 

(Scene 37: 33.04-34.51 Charlie interviews Hannah about the row with Ziggy. She said she had told Hannah about Kirk and Wakim, she'd seen them kissing, and had sent her the photo she'd taken of it)

 

Scene 38: 34.52-36.18

Charlie has found out that Hannah actually sent Ziggy the photo 2 minutes after the row, so they were arguing about something else. Meanwhile, Jack reports the prints on the drug wraps belong to Hannah Stevenson. He wants to interview her straight away but Charlie has let her go.

 

Scene 39: 36.19-36.26

Jack and Charlie jump in a car to go and pick up Hannah, her mobile signal is tracked and they know her location. Hannah tries to run but Jack and Charlie chase her down the street and restrain her while Charlie arrests her.

 

Scene 40: 36.27-37.23

Jack interviews Hannah (with solicitor present) who denies she is a drug dealer

 

Scene 41: 37.24-37.45

In the office Jack brings in the drug wraps from forensics, which when pieced together look like a skiing / snowboarding trip. Charlie mentions the bar manager Guy said he had just returned from a snowboarding holiday.

 

Scene 42: 37.46-38.36

Later that evening, Martha Jack and Charlie still in the office, Charlie has Guy Ollerbury's financial report which shows a bulk buy of aniseed all which is used in the manufacture of PMA and Jack has contacted Guy's university and discovered he was kicked off his course last year for stealing lab equipment.

Jack: Boom-boom.

Charlie: Mm!

Jack: I decided to ring Guy's university. Snowboarder Guy Ollerbury was "a prodigious but lazy

chemistry student".

Charlie: Was that a direct quote?

Jack: Direct quote, quotations and everything.

 

Scene 43:  38.37-40.00

Jack interviews bar manager Guy (with solicitor present) who says he never intended to sell the drug, he made it for his own personal use, it was Hannah's idea to sell it because she wanted the money.

"How long have you been manufacturing controlled drugs? Guy?"

 

Scene 44: 40.01-42.03

Jack and Charlie interview Hannah (no solicitor), they show her cctv footage of her passing something to Tom in the club. Hannah repeats she has nothing more to say and will not admit to dealing the drugs in the club, even after Charlie suggests what really happened is Ziggy and her argued about her selling drugs in her brothers club and she sent the photo of Kirk and Wakim to Ziggy to distract her and Jack demonstrates how her fingerprints would be all over the wraps.

 

Scene 45: 42.04-42.22

Jack and Charlie return to the office discussing Hannah and her motive. Martha informs them blood has been found on the whisky bottle, found by Ziggy.

 

(Scene 46: 42.23-43.00 Martha goes to Kirk's cell and tells him it was his sister Ziggy who assaulted him)

 

Scene 47: 43.01-43.40

 

Jack and Charlie are in the main office, Martha is on the phone in her office. She tells them Ziggy has regained consciousness but has suffered brain damage and the prognosis isn't good.

It's fine domino, try to get some rest, hope you feel better soon

Okay, Domino.  I hope you feel better soon.  

Thanks for the kind words all!

I have edited the info for the episode 2 'scene by scene' Jack Chat in this topic and the Jack chat Schedule, for 13 April. If I'm not better by this Sunday, one of you guys will have to host the chat!

Looking forward to chatting about the comedy moments, sass and banter tonight!

#witandcharm
#sharking
#kisskisskiss

Me!

Hey Jozie!

Hi Jane! we'll try to keep you on track (lots to get through!)

Hello everyone! *waves*

I'm here!  It's a bit crazy at the moment, but I will try to keep up...

hi whimsy!

Yea we can start! :)